Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 05/09/05 - 12:32PM Title: One of two

If I might make a gentle critique, I think that Gojyo sounds a bit too highbrow in his philosophizing. Not that Gojyo is incapable of spouting philosophy--far from it--but he sounds a little, ah, well-spoken. Then again, he's had his moments in the series, and they almost always revolve around Hakkai, so that could be just me. ^^; Marvelous second section! Very deep, and a nice twist on the perception of the moon put forth in the first drabble. I certainly look forward to a happy (hopefully) 58-flavored ending. ^_^