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Reviews For And Time Again
Reviewer: talli Anonymous
Date: 11/21/06 - 05:32AM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
really great story thank you the plot and characterisation is done really well wish there was more tho lol as always... :P
Reviewer: Lacerta (lacerta3@hotmail.com) Anonymous
Date: 08/22/06 - 09:04PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
I'm enjoying this so much that I can't wait to know what happens! Fate really is a b*tch, isn't she? You know what, I think the Sanzo ikkou should just find the sutras and, instead of destroying them, keep them and use them to take over the world or something! That would be a good hard slap in the face to that evil misstress and they would make awesome bad guys! Hehehe. Hehehe, anyway, this is very well written and the plot is flowing nicely. All in all, great job. :)
Reviewer: Miyuki Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 08:38AM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
Ooohhh! why havent i found this fic before? its really nice! the first chapter is already great! im already exited about finding out what happens next! Keep it up Elvarion!
Reviewer: Kiro Signed
Date: 04/05/05 - 12:54PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
I started reading this yesterday afternoon and then stayed up way too late last night to finish -- it was that addictive. Your premises of the need to destroy the sutras, and Goku's purpose, are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to explore them. My favourite line was Kanzeon saying about the omniscience of the gods: "Between us we know everything, problem's communication." ~_^
Reviewer: Solaas Signed
Date: 07/17/04 - 01:42PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
Aaah, I finally got around to reading this one and now i'm sorry I didnt' read it sooner! Allow me to hand over the booze. :) I enjoy the cinematic feel to the story, there's something about your writing that lets me see the scenes very clearly.
Reviewer: hex Anonymous
Date: 05/13/04 - 08:57PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
i have one question... why did you change your name to elvaron?... i think "starfire" sounds nice... anyway, when are you going to update this fic again? it's already on chapter 18 at ff.net. |