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Reviewer: Cupnjava Anonymous Date: 03/10/05 - 02:38PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful! I thought the humor was great and the hints of the lemon --- ooohhh! You should write more! Technically, this was solid. Good job. The pacing was great. You struck a good balance between humor and sultry. Good job! You’re writing more --- right! Don’t make me track down your e-mail address and harass you. Cupnjava c[~]~~~*sip*

Author's Response: Thank you my dear, I am trying very hard to get more knocked out, I hope to best this one if I can

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous Date: 02/04/05 - 05:57PM Title: Chapter 1

I thought there was actually going to be Konzen slash in this one ;). But I love Kenren/Tenpou too, so that was okay, and that whole scene with Konzen at the desk was brilliant ;). And at the end - "he didn’t really didn’t want to get into a game of Fuck-the-Tenpou with the Goddess of Mercy’s ice-queen nephew, not unless a threesome was in order." Mmmmm Kenren/Konzen/Tenpou. I'd like to see that :D

Author's Response: Thank you very much ... I might have a try at the threesome if I can. Thank you


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