Reviewer: Call me Kat Anonymous Date: 07/28/05 - 07:45PM Title: Strikes like lightening

I was really impressed with this story actually. Not just the character study, but that there were many parts that were so well worded. I was going to quote a few in my review till I realized there were too many I enjoyed equally. The style of the writing and lack of spacing for paragraphs made it a bit hard to follow at first but once I got used to it, it flowed nicely. It's intelligent but not in a showy way, it reminds me of when one sits down and just writes out the thoughts buzzing through their head. It worked really well for me, for a reason I can't quite describe. Thank you! ^-^