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Reviews For Delicate
Reviewer: 7veilsphaedra Anonymous Date: 02/11/07 - 01:40AM Title: Chapter 3

Hilarious! The title is very ironic.

Author's Response: Thanks again!  The title will work it's way in there, eventually.

Reviewer: Sanada Anonymous Date: 01/07/07 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter 3

I feel kind of stupid. Until this chapter I didn't realize what story this was a continuation of. It wasn’t until Hakkai was explaining to Sanzo how he and Gojyo got together that I put it together. "Long Life Arc" wasn’t a good enough hint for me. >.<

I truly admire your ability to write these characters. When Hakkai started to explain what he was doing in Gojyo's bed, I could just see Sanzo's face. Hakkai can be so mischievous! While Gojyo and Hakkai are my favorite, Hakkai and Sanzo will always share a different sort of bond that is apparent in their conversations with each other.



Author's Response: Well, thanks very much ^_^  I was really hoping that the humor would come through.  These guys are so much fun to write!  Hakkai's really quite the brat, when he wats to be!


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