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Reviews For Eden
Reviewer: snaphappy_fma Anonymous Date: 12/31/07 - 05:35PM Title: Satisfaction

This story was just fantastic: emotional and incredibly, mind-blowingly sexy.  Thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: kerrin Anonymous Date: 11/30/07 - 10:23PM Title: Satisfaction

That was an amazing story.  My goodness, it was hot!!!  Thanks for sharing :)

Reviewer: zoom Anonymous Date: 01/19/07 - 12:17AM Title: Satisfaction

Sweet, beautiful, hopeful and so sexy!  Thank you for writing this.  I loved it.

Reviewer: ShinigamiKira Anonymous Date: 12/12/06 - 02:54PM Title: Satisfaction

Wow, that absolutly blew my mind. Your an amazing author and you did an exelent job portraying the relationshib between the two. I am speachless and I bow to your greatness!

Reviewer: jessica Anonymous Date: 10/08/06 - 05:12PM Title: Satisfaction

Yay! That was wonderful! Completely beautiful in its artistry and written prose! This has been by-far the longest love-making scene I have ever read, and I loved it! It was captivating and moving, and did I mention ~HOT~?!...The fact that you didn't have to use crude words or sexual overtones to make it sexual shows the amount of sophistication you possess in your writing! Great job!...Like I said, everything was perfect! Even their playful banter and challenges seemed very IC!...I also loved the fact that Hakkai was an equal in their seduction; too often he is automatically seen as a uke and I like how you didn't chain him to that!...And I like how you tied it all up in the end; I've seen some really well-written stories that have a certain concept or theme, and then so caught up in making the rest of the story flow beautifully, forget to address their theme in the end...that's why I loved the little touch of 'Eden' at the very end!...Anyway, awesome, awesome, super job and I can't wait to read more from you! It was beautiful!^-^

Reviewer: taka Anonymous Date: 09/19/06 - 01:40AM Title: Satisfaction

I am left completly breathless.

Reviewer: Kaoro Anonymous Date: 01/09/06 - 12:37PM Title: Satisfaction

Ya know, I think I never read such a beautifull lemon. I read hot ones, really hot, lustfull, passionate ones. Yours is hot, lustfull, passionate, and beauifull. I d'ont know, there's something in it. It's still a lemon, but so full of something, of trust, of love, I don't know, there IS something, something I can't name. And ya know ? It was beautifull. Strange thing to say about a lemon...

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 10/16/05 - 12:21PM Title: Control

Wow, three chapters! ^_~ Thank you, heh.

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 10/15/05 - 10:52PM Title: Satisfaction

*@_@* Well, I really don't know where to start! I guess I could by thanking the two of you for sharing this wondrously beautiful piece with us. *bows very low*.
I read the three chapters together. And the last was so, so beautiful.(apologies for my very limited vocabulary in this instance)
Chapter 11 teased and taunted with neither wanting to relinquish um...Control...aptly titled!
Chapter 12 the sweet not saccharine turns of phrase here heightening the feeling.
One of my favourite lines,"Tomorrow, they'd worry about everything else. Tonight, there would be fire."
Which brings us nicely to the last chapter
"A sense of nostalgia....who was who or which was which. Tomorrow would come without hurrying, and..." maybe it's just me but I like the little nod to shades of Gaiden and also Wild Adapter.
And I'm sat here in the kitchen overseeing the children's painting with a big smile on my face and nearly tears from smiling and having a joy of a fic to read.
Thank you both so much. This is truly an undertaking of love and joy. So well written, poetic and alluringly sublime!(ok I got the Thesaurus out!) - ^_^ -
much love - zan

Reviewer: Call me Kat Anonymous Date: 10/13/05 - 10:19PM Title: Connections

Oh the tease! Why do I read things before they're finished?! I just end up wanting more! I feel like Gojyo teased and tormented in a wonderfully delightful way. It's the way the story is written, one can't help but feel the anticipation. Maybe another night I might say that it was too drawn out, but I was in the perfect mood for this story tonight and very much enjoyed it. Finish, finish! I can't wait to see how it ends. It's been so very very cute so far.

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 10/08/05 - 07:48PM Title: Connections

*sigh* Those two are just too cute together... And I doubt I need to keep saying this, but you're writing is amazing.

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 10/08/05 - 09:51AM Title: Connections

@#$*&@ - breathe, zan, breathe!
*Sparkley eyes* + *idiotic grin* -
this is so ...so... words...just fail me -
just love it!

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 10/08/05 - 09:41AM Title: Miscommunication

*wow!* this is an amazing chapter. the hesitation on both their parts is/are(?) written so well.
and very glad you addressed the kannan issue, hakkai's relationship to her, and also gojyo's point of view how he would mistake hakkai's hesitation, but ...ah!
hope the hesitation doesn't make them both miss the boat! ^_^!

Reviewer: rwery Anonymous Date: 10/07/05 - 07:44PM Title: Miscommunication

breath taking.. beautifully written.. spenldid! but is this all there is? awww.. you kept me all unsatisfied.. ^_^

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 10/07/05 - 05:31PM Title: Miscommunication

Yay for updates! Still excellent writing, and thank you for keeping Kanan important. *hugs* I've read stuff where they basically threw her aside, and nearly fallen over in horror. Shame on them... But yay for you! *thumbs up*

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 10/03/05 - 12:13PM Title: A Growing Heat

o.o Thankies! *nervous laugh* And excellent chappie, once again. Still poetic!

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 10/03/05 - 09:31AM Title: A Growing Heat

had a squee moment when i saw my name...and as i read, i had to remember to breathe.
beautiful, beautiful chapter!
thank you for this - *bows low!*

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 10/02/05 - 09:22PM Title: It's Warmer Inside

*all tingley inside* ^_^

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 09/28/05 - 01:49PM Title: It's Warmer Inside

"The moon rode the trees, thin enough to allow the stars their glory but highlighting their sanctuary all the same." Pretty... *sparkley eyes*

Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 09/27/05 - 02:13PM Title: Beginnings

It's so pretty! And cute (in a way...). ^_^;;; Wonderful work.


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