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Reviews For Eden
Reviewer: snaphappy_fma Anonymous
Date: 12/31/07 - 05:35PM
Title: Satisfaction
This story was just fantastic: emotional and incredibly, mind-blowingly sexy. Thanks for writing it!
Reviewer: kerrin Anonymous
Date: 11/30/07 - 10:23PM
Title: Satisfaction
That was an amazing story. My goodness, it was hot!!! Thanks for sharing :)
Reviewer: zoom Anonymous
Date: 01/19/07 - 12:17AM
Title: Satisfaction
Sweet, beautiful, hopeful and so sexy! Thank you for writing this. I loved it.
Reviewer: ShinigamiKira Anonymous
Date: 12/12/06 - 02:54PM
Title: Satisfaction
Wow, that absolutly blew my mind. Your an amazing author and you did an exelent job portraying the relationshib between the two. I am speachless and I bow to your greatness!
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous
Date: 10/08/06 - 05:12PM
Title: Satisfaction
Yay! That was wonderful! Completely beautiful in its artistry and written prose! This has been by-far the longest love-making scene I have ever read, and I loved it! It was captivating and moving, and did I mention ~HOT~?!...The fact that you didn't have to use crude words or sexual overtones to make it sexual shows the amount of sophistication you possess in your writing! Great job!...Like I said, everything was perfect! Even their playful banter and challenges seemed very IC!...I also loved the fact that Hakkai was an equal in their seduction; too often he is automatically seen as a uke and I like how you didn't chain him to that!...And I like how you tied it all up in the end; I've seen some really well-written stories that have a certain concept or theme, and then so caught up in making the rest of the story flow beautifully, forget to address their theme in the end...that's why I loved the little touch of 'Eden' at the very end!...Anyway, awesome, awesome, super job and I can't wait to read more from you! It was beautiful!^-^
Reviewer: taka Anonymous
Date: 09/19/06 - 01:40AM
Title: Satisfaction
I am left completly breathless.
Reviewer: Kaoro Anonymous
Date: 01/09/06 - 12:37PM
Title: Satisfaction
Ya know, I think I never read such a beautifull lemon. I read hot ones, really hot, lustfull, passionate ones. Yours is hot, lustfull, passionate, and beauifull. I d'ont know, there's something in it. It's still a lemon, but so full of something, of trust, of love, I don't know, there IS something, something I can't name. And ya know ? It was beautifull. Strange thing to say about a lemon...
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 10/16/05 - 12:21PM
Title: Control
Wow, three chapters! ^_~ Thank you, heh.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 10/15/05 - 10:52PM
Title: Satisfaction
*@_@* Well, I really don't know where to start! I guess I could by thanking the two of you for sharing this wondrously beautiful piece with us. *bows very low*.
Reviewer: Call me Kat Anonymous
Date: 10/13/05 - 10:19PM
Title: Connections
Oh the tease! Why do I read things before they're finished?! I just end up wanting more! I feel like Gojyo teased and tormented in a wonderfully delightful way. It's the way the story is written, one can't help but feel the anticipation. Maybe another night I might say that it was too drawn out, but I was in the perfect mood for this story tonight and very much enjoyed it. Finish, finish! I can't wait to see how it ends. It's been so very very cute so far.
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 10/08/05 - 07:48PM
Title: Connections
*sigh* Those two are just too cute together... And I doubt I need to keep saying this, but you're writing is amazing.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 10/08/05 - 09:51AM
Title: Connections
@#$*&@ - breathe, zan, breathe!
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 10/08/05 - 09:41AM
Title: Miscommunication
*wow!* this is an amazing chapter. the hesitation on both their parts is/are(?) written so well.
Reviewer: rwery Anonymous
Date: 10/07/05 - 07:44PM
Title: Miscommunication
breath taking.. beautifully written.. spenldid! but is this all there is? awww.. you kept me all unsatisfied.. ^_^
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 10/07/05 - 05:31PM
Title: Miscommunication
Yay for updates! Still excellent writing, and thank you for keeping Kanan important. *hugs* I've read stuff where they basically threw her aside, and nearly fallen over in horror. Shame on them... But yay for you! *thumbs up*
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 10/03/05 - 12:13PM
Title: A Growing Heat
o.o Thankies! *nervous laugh* And excellent chappie, once again. Still poetic!
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 10/03/05 - 09:31AM
Title: A Growing Heat
had a squee moment when i saw my name...and as i read, i had to remember to breathe.
Reviewer: zan Anonymous
Date: 10/02/05 - 09:22PM
Title: It's Warmer Inside
*all tingley inside* ^_^
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 09/28/05 - 01:49PM
Title: It's Warmer Inside
"The moon rode the trees, thin enough to allow the stars their glory but highlighting their sanctuary all the same." Pretty... *sparkley eyes*
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous
Date: 09/27/05 - 02:13PM
Title: Beginnings
It's so pretty! And cute (in a way...). ^_^;;; Wonderful work. |