I really do like this. Your descriptions are top-notch, and your handling of the 585 pairing is unique. ^_^ If I may gently critique, I'd say that you might edit it for comma usage. There are many places in here where the placing of a comma would be appropriate, for ease of reading as well as for grammar's sake. For instance, the sentence "When it raints Gojyo .... " is, at first blush, stating that it rains Gojyo. ^^;