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Reviews For Hakkai and the Terrible, Horrible, No-Good, Very Bad Day

Reviewer: jessica Anonymous Date: 10/09/06 - 12:49PM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

Poor Hakkai! 'Shitfuck luck' is right! But I did enjoy the part when he gets thwacked by Sanzo's ~evil~ fan! Very cute 'what-if' story! ^__^

Reviewer: Dayast Joy Anonymous Date: 08/01/05 - 01:52AM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

Hahahahahahaha! This has left me wheezing! The way you built up the humour was amazing -- it's so true that Hakkai is utterly neat, and never hit by the fan etc. -- crashing Hakuryuu, the "cock gobbler" statement (a fantastic one liner from your witty hanyou, and sounds exactly like something Gojyo would say!) and then Sanzo having wild monkey sex in the next room, how unexpected and side-achingly funny was that?! But the ending, man, the ending was just...perfect. This was a TOTAL scream, thanks for the treat :D

Author's Response: YES! *glomp* I'm glad you found this one funny! I had problems with writing it, but I'm grateful that everyone likes it enough to convince me that it turned out okay in the end. :D Out of curiosity, what do you think was Gojyo's 'malfunction' in the end? I'm curious. XD

Reviewer: Shiro Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 09:53PM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

You just made my night. I love how you build up the tension in him. The bad days and all that. XD poor Hakkai. *pats him* Poor Gojyo for the whole erectile dysfunction problem (that is so much more funnier to me XD especially since this is Gojyo we're talking about here) Great story. >3

Author's Response: See, that's where the comedy is--can we even really imagine Gojyo ever NOT being able to get it up? XD I'm glad you liked this one. *bows* Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: shinei Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 01:32PM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

It was really good. But the last part is a little...not like Hakkai. But it's really good for hakkai to have a very rough day is cool.

Author's Response: The cussing? Which bit?

Reviewer: Satri Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 10:43AM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

I swear, that made me laugh so hard I cried, especially the bit about Sanzo trying not to be a raging cock-gobbler. I feel sorry for Hakkai, but if one gets a laugh or twenty off at his expense... all the more power to you. (Premature ejaculation is funnier, in my opinion.)

Author's Response: Most of the other characters are made to be foolish in the series, especially Gojyo and Goku, so I don't think it's fair that Hakkai doesn't get his turn. ^^; I'm glad you found it hilarious; I enjoyed writing it. (I agree with you, personally, although the idea of Gojyo not being able to get it up at all is so ridiculous that it makes me laugh.)

Reviewer: wolfstone Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 08:19AM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

*falls off chair laughing* oh my goodness! that was HILARIOUS! very, very good. but, oh dear, poor, poor hakkai....i've never actually heard him swear before!:P well...this just proves that he's human after all, eh? heh..loved it.

Author's Response: I've never really written Hakkai as swearing unless he was under extreme duress. So the idea of all the stress building up until he's cussing about stupid things is funny to me. ^^;

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 06/29/05 - 07:28AM Title: That's it. I'm moving to Australia.

man you are so cruel. poor, poor hakkai. this was one HELL of a bad day.
I don't think you need the author's note at the end .... i just laughed out loud at the end. poor mr-perfect.
just what i needed, from being ill. huggles to you ...*goes off to read chap7 BaL:RHaC* will leave a proper ramble this time! hehe!

Author's Response: Bastard needs to get picked on. *cuddles* Hope you feel better.