Aww. ;_; 383 isn't my favorite pairing, by a long chalk, but I really, *really* like this story. I would have liked to have more of an explanation as to why or how Sanzo and Hakkai hooked up, but that's the way I am with almost all my yaoi pairings, so that could just be me. Goku's angst is appropriate--most people don't give him enough credit, and write him as being too childlike for what the series portrays him as. He's a teenager, really, and teens are more than capable of angst, and of loving someone who just doesn't love them back. Which you have portrayed very well.

Author's Response: Not my favourite pairing either, really (godilove585) but it just seemed appropriate. Thanks very much for your comments!