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Reviews For My Sun
Reviewer: Holidame.deviantart.com Anonymous
Date: 06/29/05 - 12:01PM
Title: Drabble.
This has a lot of really deep, heart wrenching images in it. Between the way he describes what he hears so lovingly is the way he wants to be wanted. Beautifully executed in such a small space. Incredibly lovely.
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 06/27/05 - 06:51AM
Title: Drabble.
Aww. ;_; 383 isn't my favorite pairing, by a long chalk, but I really, *really* like this story. I would have liked to have more of an explanation as to why or how Sanzo and Hakkai hooked up, but that's the way I am with almost all my yaoi pairings, so that could just be me. Goku's angst is appropriate--most people don't give him enough credit, and write him as being too childlike for what the series portrays him as. He's a teenager, really, and teens are more than capable of angst, and of loving someone who just doesn't love them back. Which you have portrayed very well. |