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Reviewer: holidame.deviantart.com Anonymous Date: 06/29/05 - 12:05PM Title: 1/1

This was a cute drabble, with sex and plausibility laid in for effect. I really do like the way you got their reactions down pat in such a tiny strip of dialogue. Plus, seeing someone else describe how incredibly delicious Gojyo and Hakkai would be as they kissed is nice as well. Fantastic work!

Author's Response: Thank you!! It was only supposed to be 100 words, so I accredit that to it's crisp manner...it took me a bit to figure out just how I would connect Gojyo's hair color to Hakkai's eyes (and occasionally my brain would slip a bit and forget that Hakkai's a brunet), but this seemed to be the best way. Thank you again!

Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 06/27/05 - 06:47AM Title: 1/1

*claps* I like this, a lot. I've never thought about the correlation between the contrasting-colors lecture that Koumyou gives, and the contrasting colors associated with the ikkou. (I admit, I consulted a color wheel to ensure that your assertions were correct. ^^; ) I'm really impressed; this is a different take on both 58 and 39, in a simplistic, somewhat sexy and extremely effective manner. Love it.

Author's Response: Ahah, no problem--I would have done the same. But you have to watch out for some of those color wheels because they can be inaccurate (don't ask me how, I have no clue). And thank you! I think this may be the first time I attempted 39 and it actually survived my 58-fanatic brain. :D

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 06/25/05 - 07:06AM Title: 1/1

nicely understated, i love the colour thing going with them.