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Reviews For The Rain
Reviewer: gerigirl Anonymous
Date: 08/03/07 - 03:58AM
Title: The Rain
i felt bad for goku sanzo just used him because it was raining asif that's an excuse to screw him and then just get up and leave him laying in his semen and call it a night for shame sanzo for shame.
Reviewer: jessiakayuki Anonymous
Date: 07/28/06 - 01:27AM
Title: The Rain
ah talk about crappy it doesn't even get your blood pumpin or anything when i read a fanfiction i can picture the characters i see their faces i can tell that the words that the authors put in their mouths are things that they would actually say just pure crappiness. i kinda feel bad that im critisizing your work since i don't write fanfictions myself but ive read enough books and fanfictions to know whats good and what bad
Reviewer: Call me Ryu... Anonymous
Date: 07/19/05 - 06:02PM
Title: The Rain
Wow...that story was...I give it a full 10 out of 10...that...rocked!
Congratulations! Your masterpiece was a success!!! *Pats you on your back* |
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