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Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 05/23/05 - 12:05PM
Title: Damming It All
first of all...man being a teacher sucks! ^_~
and you're really ripping into my heart for gojyo and hakkai...no! NO! NOOO!
will it ever be right between them ever again???
i'm glad you're keeping the goku you started with...the interaction here between the two normal 'adversaries' feels as much right as these two would know if something was up with the other, in a different way to how gojyo and hakkai pick up stuff about each other.
and you let Goku have beer..Sanzo is so gonna be mad at you...and speaking of whom...his highness' appearance at the end...again your priceless and precious sanzo...hmm was he going to kill gojyo because they were noisy or was it because of ....hehehe!
another nice chapter. i did try to leave a review over at mmorg, but it is too hard. i think in the end it just ate it and spat it back out! sorry. ooh and i can't wait for your surprise pairings. much love
Author's Response: ... *dies laughing* "His Highness"... that's a priceless summary of Sanzo if I've ever heard it. ^^;
I see Goku and Gojyo as having a familial relationship, personally. Big brother/little brother. They pick on each other because they love each other like crazy, with the attitude of "I'm the only one allowed to kick his ass!". And when something is seriously wrong, they can tune in to that.
And I personally think that if Sanzo's going to kill me, it will be because I mock him on a regular basis, and not because of giving Goku beer, although I'm sure that will be somewhere on the Reasons to Kill PoP list. ^^;
Reviewer: Sanada Anonymous
Date: 05/23/05 - 11:23AM
Title: Damming It All
So we learn where the hostages in the first chapter came from (poor Lian). And as promised you let Goku have a drink, for which Sanzo will kill you when he finds out. Hakkai seems to believe “Kanan” is the real deal.
While the direction this is going between Hakkai and Gojyo breaks my heart, I think you did an excellent job with Goku in this chapter. How he handled finding Gojyo in his room and the reason behind it. Their discussion about Hakkai over the beer (though I haven’t met anyone that liked the taste of beer right away), Goku’s blunt questions about Gojyo’s love life and his confusion over what was going on. All of it nicely done.
And as always, you did an excellent job of portraying Gojyo’s anger and frustration. And the cameo Sanzo put in was great!
Author's Response: If Sanzo is going to kill me, it's going to be because of the many, many jokes I've made about his sexual prowess and proclivities, and not because of letting Goku drink. Although that'll be somewhere on the list, I'm sure.
Hakkai and Gojyo are breaking my heart, as well. In spite of the fact that I'm doing this to them. ._.;; And actually, while I didn't like beer itself at first sip, I have instantly liked certain brands of beer, for the exact reason that Goku gives--instead of tasting like alcohol, it tasted like drinking bread. ^^;
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