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Reviews For And Time Again
Reviewer: bywthedragon Signed Date: 01/22/07 - 12:30PM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!

Write more! Please don't leave me hanging here!

Reviewer: bywthedragon Signed Date: 01/22/07 - 12:24PM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!

Write more! Please don't leave me hanging here!

Reviewer: talli Anonymous Date: 11/21/06 - 05:32AM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

really great story

thank you

the plot and characterisation is done really well

wish there was more tho lol

as always... :P

Reviewer: Lacerta (lacerta3@hotmail.com) Anonymous Date: 08/22/06 - 09:04PM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

I'm enjoying this so much that I can't wait to know what happens! Fate really is a b*tch, isn't she? You know what, I think the Sanzo ikkou should just find the sutras and, instead of destroying them, keep them and use them to take over the world or something! That would be a good hard slap in the face to that evil misstress and they would make awesome bad guys! Hehehe.

Hehehe, anyway, this is very well written and the plot is flowing nicely. All in all, great job.

:)

Reviewer: Miyuki Anonymous Date: 12/17/05 - 11:53AM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

ahhh... finally finished all the 17 chapters... but that is an interesting question... are you born only to do this or this thing? and why after you've done your job can't you enjoy life and you just dissapear? its really sad... but i liked the way you imagined how the final battle of the sanzo-ikkou would be... it was sad... but atleast they died fighting... i would have been dissapointed if the end of the mission was easy... please if you have the time... please continue this great story!

Reviewer: Miyuki Anonymous Date: 12/06/05 - 08:38AM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

Ooohhh! why havent i found this fic before? its really nice! the first chapter is already great! im already exited about finding out what happens next! Keep it up Elvarion!

Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous Date: 12/03/05 - 06:39PM Title: Chapter 5: Of Headaches and More Headaches

There's more!!!! Yippee!!!!!!! Unfortunately, my teenaged daughter is hovering, I think she wants something --- like the computer. Or a hug. Or a grope -- oh GAWD, that was so funny.... Sanzo's reaction..... Still laughing......

Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous Date: 12/03/05 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 4: Echoes of the Past

Hee! I see Sanzo found a fan substitute! Good chapter, moved things along nicely. You are rapidly becoming one of my fav Saiyuki Authors!

Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous Date: 12/03/05 - 06:10PM Title: Chapter 3: Meetings and Memories

What do you mean 'less humor' in this chapter? I laughed my head off at Goku and his on going lunch, and the blue cheese..... granted it did take a serious turn toward the end, and btw, I totally believe you about the drains.... I once spent a week on crutches because my mom dropped a sack of groceries on my foot!

Reviewer: Anna-chan Anonymous Date: 06/09/05 - 08:05AM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

I just found this story, I absolutely loved it. I am completely jealous of your writing style, it's so unique. Superb all in all!

Reviewer: k'yra Anonymous Date: 04/19/05 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

this story is awesome. not only is it well written, but it goes along an interesting and worthy storyline. i hope you write more.

Reviewer: Kiro Signed Date: 04/05/05 - 12:54PM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

I started reading this yesterday afternoon and then stayed up way too late last night to finish -- it was that addictive. Your premises of the need to destroy the sutras, and Goku's purpose, are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to explore them. My favourite line was Kanzeon saying about the omniscience of the gods: "Between us we know everything, problem's communication." ~_^

Reviewer: yuelin Anonymous Date: 03/21/05 - 06:01AM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

hullo....please do continue this story..i love it, and i really enjoyed reading your other stories too:) do continue..i love your writing style.

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 02/06/05 - 10:10AM Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets

hey i only just found this story, and i think its really good. it does beg for more like in a second season of a beloved series... however it does end nicely too. very well done on the writing and it even brought back memories from reading chemistry in uni way back when hakkai 4 ever

Reviewer: Solaas Signed Date: 07/17/04 - 01:42PM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

Aaah, I finally got around to reading this one and now i'm sorry I didnt' read it sooner! Allow me to hand over the booze. :) I enjoy the cinematic feel to the story, there's something about your writing that lets me see the scenes very clearly.

Reviewer: hex Anonymous Date: 05/13/04 - 08:57PM Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup

i have one question... why did you change your name to elvaron?... i think "starfire" sounds nice... anyway, when are you going to update this fic again? it's already on chapter 18 at ff.net.

Author's Response: Hi Hex, My full screen name is Elvaron 'SF' Starfire. I alternate between sf and Elvaron these days. I registered 'sf' as an admin then uploaded stories under 'Elvaron', so it stuck. Updating on this fic is going to take extremely long. I need to think of what happens next, and my inspiration is currently working on Impossibility, amongst other things. Chapter 18 on ff.net is a bogus chapter... more like an author's note in disguise. This fic is really only 17 chapters long.


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