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Reviews For And Time Again
Reviewer: bywthedragon Signed
Date: 01/22/07 - 12:30PM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!! Write more! Please don't leave me hanging here!
Reviewer: bywthedragon Signed
Date: 01/22/07 - 12:24PM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD!!!!! Write more! Please don't leave me hanging here!
Reviewer: talli Anonymous
Date: 11/21/06 - 05:32AM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
really great story thank you the plot and characterisation is done really well wish there was more tho lol as always... :P
Reviewer: Lacerta (lacerta3@hotmail.com) Anonymous
Date: 08/22/06 - 09:04PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
I'm enjoying this so much that I can't wait to know what happens! Fate really is a b*tch, isn't she? You know what, I think the Sanzo ikkou should just find the sutras and, instead of destroying them, keep them and use them to take over the world or something! That would be a good hard slap in the face to that evil misstress and they would make awesome bad guys! Hehehe. Hehehe, anyway, this is very well written and the plot is flowing nicely. All in all, great job. :)
Reviewer: Miyuki Anonymous
Date: 12/17/05 - 11:53AM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
ahhh... finally finished all the 17 chapters... but that is an interesting question... are you born only to do this or this thing? and why after you've done your job can't you enjoy life and you just dissapear? its really sad... but i liked the way you imagined how the final battle of the sanzo-ikkou would be... it was sad... but atleast they died fighting... i would have been dissapointed if the end of the mission was easy... please if you have the time... please continue this great story!
Reviewer: Miyuki Anonymous
Date: 12/06/05 - 08:38AM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
Ooohhh! why havent i found this fic before? its really nice! the first chapter is already great! im already exited about finding out what happens next! Keep it up Elvarion!
Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 06:39PM
Title: Chapter 5: Of Headaches and More Headaches
There's more!!!! Yippee!!!!!!! Unfortunately, my teenaged daughter is hovering, I think she wants something --- like the computer. Or a hug. Or a grope -- oh GAWD, that was so funny.... Sanzo's reaction..... Still laughing......
Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 06:30PM
Title: Chapter 4: Echoes of the Past
Hee! I see Sanzo found a fan substitute! Good chapter, moved things along nicely. You are rapidly becoming one of my fav Saiyuki Authors!
Reviewer: MotherChowGoddess Anonymous
Date: 12/03/05 - 06:10PM
Title: Chapter 3: Meetings and Memories
What do you mean 'less humor' in this chapter? I laughed my head off at Goku and his on going lunch, and the blue cheese..... granted it did take a serious turn toward the end, and btw, I totally believe you about the drains.... I once spent a week on crutches because my mom dropped a sack of groceries on my foot!
Reviewer: Anna-chan Anonymous
Date: 06/09/05 - 08:05AM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
I just found this story, I absolutely loved it. I am completely jealous of your writing style, it's so unique. Superb all in all!
Reviewer: k'yra Anonymous
Date: 04/19/05 - 01:31PM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
this story is awesome. not only is it well written, but it goes along an interesting and worthy storyline. i hope you write more.
Reviewer: Kiro Signed
Date: 04/05/05 - 12:54PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
I started reading this yesterday afternoon and then stayed up way too late last night to finish -- it was that addictive. Your premises of the need to destroy the sutras, and Goku's purpose, are quite intriguing and I hope you continue to explore them. My favourite line was Kanzeon saying about the omniscience of the gods: "Between us we know everything, problem's communication." ~_^
Reviewer: yuelin Anonymous
Date: 03/21/05 - 06:01AM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
hullo....please do continue this story..i love it, and i really enjoyed reading your other stories too:) do continue..i love your writing style.
Reviewer: zan Anonymous
Date: 02/06/05 - 10:10AM
Title: Chapter 17: Of Jeeps and Jets
hey i only just found this story, and i think its really good. it does beg for more like in a second season of a beloved series... however it does end nicely too. very well done on the writing and it even brought back memories from reading chemistry in uni way back when hakkai 4 ever
Reviewer: Solaas Signed
Date: 07/17/04 - 01:42PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
Aaah, I finally got around to reading this one and now i'm sorry I didnt' read it sooner! Allow me to hand over the booze. :) I enjoy the cinematic feel to the story, there's something about your writing that lets me see the scenes very clearly.
Reviewer: hex Anonymous
Date: 05/13/04 - 08:57PM
Title: Chapter 1: Clouds in a Coffee Cup
i have one question... why did you change your name to elvaron?... i think "starfire" sounds nice... anyway, when are you going to update this fic again? it's already on chapter 18 at ff.net. |