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Reviews For Breathe
Reviewer: Sorchafyre Anonymous
Date: 05/10/05 - 07:42PM
Title: Breathe
Thank you for sharing this piece. It is breathtakingly sbutle in places, and sublimely forward in others. It nicely captures the delicate tentitiveness in Hakkai's steel will, and the straightforward depth of Gojyo's veneer. I was drawn in, moved and generally lost my sense of time-and-place as I read this.
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 04/18/05 - 08:32AM
Title: Footnotes & Lyrics
Sweet and poignant, in a Gojyo sort of way. I've always thought of him as having a crude, shielding sort of poetry when it comes to his thought processes, and this fits into that perception rather well. I nearly laughed out loud at the "What, like you forgot how to shit?" line, because I'm immature and like poop jokes. ^^; Nice filling-in-of-the-gaps between him finding Hakkai and arriving at the temple. *tucks into favorites*
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 04/17/05 - 08:10PM
Title: Breathe
oops! something happened there so have to continue this from previous review sorry about that! oh to continue
As paradise fictitious from 1260 Emily Dickinson.
You have capture who they are so well. Genius. And my list of favourites grows ever longer.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 04/17/05 - 08:03PM
Title: Breathe
beautiful and poetic. and just for you on the wondroussness of loss
Because that you are going
Because that Death is final
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The "lifethat is" will then have been |
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