Reviews For Beyond All Limits
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous Date: 10/09/06 - 06:18PM Title: Schisms
Very awesome and original story plot! I loved the elements of dark and witty come in to play in this angsty fic! I'm excited to read what you have planned next! ^-^
Reviewer: calbee Anonymous Date: 11/04/05 - 10:36PM Title: Schisms
Oh damn, this fic is *good* (though I wish I read this before its sequel. Things make *a lot* more sense in that story now. Heheh).
Still, wonderfully written not to mention nicely tied with its sequel. Will read more of your fics for sure now that I know that they are all so good.
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 07/30/05 - 10:19AM Title: Schisms
Hmm... It does seem that I haven't submitted a review. Maybe... Anyway, you are seriously the best author on this site. All of your stuff on here is incredible! Thanks for giving me (and my friends, since I'll be forcing them to read) some good and plotlineful Saiyuki fan fiction to read. ^_^
Reviewer: Irenthel Anonymous Date: 07/20/05 - 12:34PM Title: Making a Break
I feel so lucky to have come across this story, I was in dire need of good Saiyuki fanfiction. Wonderful work!
Reviewer: IsilmeAlantha Anonymous Date: 06/30/05 - 10:55AM Title: Schisms
Actually, I didn't feel it was one of your best in parts. Towards the end it felt more like your better writing, but not so much at the beginning... For the real review:
Had some very nice wording, as you tend to do. Felt so bad for Gojyo and Hakkai, but I'm glad things turned out somewhat okay for them in the end! Yayness abound for that. It was a cute scene at the end. Sanzo on his fan-happy spree amused me. ^_^
I liked the detail you had in the last two chapters or so. It was much better in those, IMO. But I think that's only because things were being figured out and resolved and you were being much more discriptive. And that always helps.
(o_o;; Ee, my first review, please don't eat me!)
Reviewer: GhostHelwig Signed Date: 05/12/05 - 12:12PM Title: Schisms
...wow. I don't even know where to -start-. Your obviously supreme writing talent? Your exquisite characterizations? Your obvious care in the words you use to portray what's going on?
No. I think I'll start with what drew me in - the -plot-.
You took what could have been a OOC story where Gojyo's craziness is played for laughs and 'teh edgy horror' and turned it into pure, undeniable gold. Everything he went through was horrifying, & I found myself on the verge of laughing simply because everything was -so NOT funny-. And the fact that the attempted rape was dealt with in such a careful, respectful manner made my love of this story all the more poignant.
And I loved the scene where Sanzo had to tell Goku what rape was. This line-
~"It's the worst thing you can do to someone."~
-just struck me as being very Sanzo in its very simple intensity.
All in all, a wonderful read. I look forward to the continuation. ^_^
Reviewer: naim Anonymous Date: 05/10/05 - 11:01AM Title: Kaiya
All I could say is WOW! Read the whole story but i figured this chapter really deserved the review, you're so great! I loved this chapter! From the summary, where Gojyo woul commit the ultimate betrayal, WOW! Really you're a great writer! I wish you prolonged Gojyo's agony though. Looking forward to the sequel!
Reviewer: Tochira Anonymous Date: 05/06/05 - 09:32AM Title: Schisms
*is dead from laughing* There are no words for how much I love this Sanzo. He's exactly himself, no more and no less and he's so /mean/ in all those little petty ways! The crude, rude turns of phrase in dialogue and out made it all the more enjoyable (and believable). XD
Fantastic writing. Thank you for finishing this, because it deserved to be complete.
Reviewer: Dayast_Joy Signed Date: 05/04/05 - 08:36PM Title: Schisms
These lines were so touching that I couldn't not point them out: "That smile in the rain had been one of familiarity and welcoming, calling him back to where he didn't know he belonged, to what he'd been looking for his entire fucking life." Exquisite. This story is pure writing talent -- can't say it enough :)
Reviewer: Dayast_Joy Signed Date: 05/04/05 - 07:55PM Title: Schisms
This was AMAZING. I can't believe how expertly you manipulate the reader's emotions with your words: I was hurting with sympathy, laughing till I snorted and gaping goggle eyed...all while reading just one chapter! This series definitely goes into my favourites, I just want to read it over and over again. You are possibly the best Sanzo writer I've ever come across: his exclamation "Quit feeding my car chocolate, fuckmook," was just so TRUE to character, and it was hilarious and outrageous how he just knocked the manager out and ran for it. And punching himself in the face to try and escape Goku's snoring, and the closing line: "It was going to be a beautiful day for Sanzo. Oh, yes." How DO you do it, its just WOW. Totally. And Hakkai getting cash back from the credit card, that reminds me of the Gunlock episode when the put upon youkai runs away...spot-on, beautiful characterisation (a helluva lot more accurate than Sanzo's aim), great conversation, tight pacing -- I can't ask for more in a fic, really. Please please write more. :D
Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous Date: 04/26/05 - 04:17PM Title: Schisms
XD I love your characterizations... And I wish I could blend humour and sincerity as well as you do; it's that juxtaposition that really makes your stories a great read.
Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/26/05 - 10:11AM Title: Schisms
ps - you mean there's more to this...excellent. drooling in anticipation already
Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/26/05 - 10:08AM Title: Schisms
and as the "moment spun out tense and awkward" you had goku defuse(diffuse?)- both seem apt here- the situation. A nice touch...it shows a mature side of his which people often don't give him enough credit for.
Reviewer: DayastJoy Anonymous Date: 04/20/05 - 02:31AM Title: Kaiya
This was an amazing read. Awesome pacing and action, I couldn't tear my eyes away. So many parts are laugh out loud funny! I was hooked from the first line about Goku, I think your protrayal of him is especially precious. Gojyo writing "I AM A STUPID MONKEE" on his forehead is hilarious, and in the series Gojyo's always scribbling on Goku, so that was a cute mention. And he SO would get the spelling wrong :)
The plot is tight, the characterisation spot on, I love Hakkai's little jibes at Sanzo, their verbal sparring in the series is often hopelessly lost by crap subtitles, so quality fanfiction like this story is a real treat. I haven't laughed so hard or been so freaked out all at the same time for absolutely ages. THANK YOU for writing this.
Can't wait for the concluding part, the hotel manager ought to win a prize for funniest original character :) I'm glad I'll be reading more of him in the next episode. Thanks alot for sharing. Treat us, write more ;D
Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/14/05 - 10:28AM Title: Making a Break
ahahaha! the sanzo houshi sama flea dance of death! i like it...will he get a slot on riverdance d'you think? i found abit of poetry to fit your fic...
The Sick Rose
O rose, thou art sick! (Gojyo)
Has found out thy bed (Gojyo's mind and memories)
can't wait for the last chapter.
Reviewer: Zimus Anonymous Date: 04/13/05 - 03:24PM Title: Agave
Oh my....this story is just amazingly fun... and dark at the same time... I've just had the best time reading it! Definetly an instant favorite.
Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/13/05 - 12:14PM Title: Making a Break
whoa! girl you have been busy....can't wait to find out what happens at the end. a gripping dark thriller of the supernatural kind...you so rock!