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Reviews For Sunset
Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/28/05 - 09:53AM Title: Sunset

hey i read moon rising over at ff. i like the imagery you're using. very nice... just so you know i loved "living through" and"there is no past". you have a mellifluous writing style which uses well the metaphors and imagery you put into the pieces. I like.

Author's Response: Thank you! "Moon Rising" should be up around here sometime. I'm glad you've enjoyed my stuff and thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 04/11/05 - 06:56AM Title: Sunset

Do a sequel. Or I will hunt thee down. ^_^; Very, very well-done. Not often that I've seen fics where Hakkai pines for Gojyo and not the other way around; I like the twist, and you make it very plausible indeed. I honestly would look forward to a sequel. You're clearly a talented writer with enjoyable and rich turns of phrase, and such a person's work is always nice to read. ^^

Author's Response: ^_^ Ahaha. I will get started on that! And thank you!! I feel all warm and fuzzy an' stuff...I'm unsure if Gojyo will be pining as well, but nonetheless, he will whack some sense into our beloved Hakkai. I'm honored that you've reviewed--I enjoy your writing very much.

Reviewer: Kiro Signed Date: 04/10/05 - 09:01PM Title: Sunset

Agh, wow. So poignant, such beautiful imagery. So many phrases I loved, especially "a bit of nature trapped in a crimson prison" and "He did not shine with his own light; no, Hakkai was forced to borrow and he paled in comparison to the real thing." I'll look forward to seeing more of your writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried that I was getting a bit too tell-y...but I'm glad that you enjoyed the metaphors I was putting to use :D thank you again!


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