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Reviews For Sunset
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 04/28/05 - 09:53AM
Title: Sunset
hey i read moon rising over at ff. i like the imagery you're using. very nice... just so you know i loved "living through" and"there is no past". you have a mellifluous writing style which uses well the metaphors and imagery you put into the pieces. I like.
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 04/11/05 - 06:56AM
Title: Sunset
Do a sequel. Or I will hunt thee down. ^_^;
Very, very well-done. Not often that I've seen fics where Hakkai pines for Gojyo and not the other way around; I like the twist, and you make it very plausible indeed. I honestly would look forward to a sequel. You're clearly a talented writer with enjoyable and rich turns of phrase, and such a person's work is always nice to read. ^^
Reviewer: Kiro Signed
Date: 04/10/05 - 09:01PM
Title: Sunset
Agh, wow. So poignant, such beautiful imagery. So many phrases I loved, especially "a bit of nature trapped in a crimson prison" and "He did not shine with his own light; no, Hakkai was forced to borrow and he paled in comparison to the real thing." I'll look forward to seeing more of your writing. |