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Reviewer: gen Anonymous Date: 03/06/07 - 07:04AM Title: Sliding

just amazing really. i bookmarked you on both work - and home pc

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 12/13/05 - 09:10AM Title: Sliding

I liked this chapter:
I enjoyed the 'conversations' between the sanzo-ikkou and their gaiden-selves. It is well written, very amusing and very true to who they are. - I think that you had the 'in figthing' between sanzo and konzen down exactly right, under the circumstances. But me, being me, I especially liked the Hakkai-Tenpou inner conflict. So well written!
And you still managed to keep it in story and and keep the flow!

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 10/31/05 - 12:34AM Title: Pieces

Oh poor, poor and confused Hakkai! ^_^ -

Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 09/23/05 - 08:13AM Title: Refuge

I think a warning about the overtones of bestiality would have been nice. Yes, Hakuryu was once Goujun, but he still physically is an animal, and the scene where he rips up Hakkai's arm was one that I think deserved at least a cursory notice in the warning-section.

Author's Response: The point is that it is not Hakuryuu, it is Goujun -- a sentient being trapped in an "animal" body. In that case, the sentience overrides the aspect of bestiality. Maybe that's just arguing semantics, but that's how I see it. The chapter was rated R, and there aren't enough specific warnings in the drop-down when adding a chapter to cover such things. That said, the entire fic comes with a "read at your own risk" warning, and maybe I need to repeat that on each chapter.

Reviewer: lazy zan Anonymous Date: 09/08/05 - 10:46AM Title: Unsealed

omfg, bloody hellfire...this is one AMAZING effing chapter! this story has just gone supernova in my books! i love, love, love, love, love, love this. *goes off to read it again and again* - and so many hugs to you, i hope i don't smother you before you finish this wonderfully fabulous tale! -
ok am going off now! promise...

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 08/27/05 - 10:23PM Title: Need

the nice thing about going away is you get 3 chaps al at once...and what wondeful things to read when i need a pick me up from two unruly children, a tonne of laundry and a bit of jet lag thrown in!
and the Gaiden...thank you, thank you and that you so much..*hugs you* if that's ok. much love -me!

Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous Date: 08/17/05 - 07:29PM Title: Need

Dragon sex! No, I liked the Gaiden allusions, and I've never stopped liking the path of this story, so kudos for writing a very engaging fanfiction. :D I'm so happy that you added more Hakkai/Gojyo action here.

Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 06/24/05 - 08:17AM Title: Beyond

OK, I have been reading this faithfully since you started publishing it, and I have also been shitty about leaving reviews. ._.; That apology said, damn. I do enjoy this fic. You write surreality very well, making it interesting and incoherent all at once. I like the 383 implications that you had in the beginning. It's not my favorite pairing at all, but I am developing something of a fondness for the idea, and you handled their tangled interactions very well. ^_^ The development of the fic into 585 was unexpected, but exciting for me (huge fangirl), and VERY well-done. Also, I like that you did not 'force' the pairings to overwhelm the rest of the story. There's plot here, and it's a damn fine one besides. The sexual tensions are necessary and at the same time do not interrupt that plot. I loved the elemental sutras, and the delving into Goku's nature and that of his diadem. You have a lot of great ideas and thought that went into this story. And I look forward to the next section. *dances* Keep writing. It's great stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you. ^_^ Your comments are much appreciated.

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 06/24/05 - 05:00AM Title: Beyond

aah! brain maeltdown will leave coherent review later...

Reviewer: Blood_Debt Anonymous Date: 06/17/05 - 05:20PM Title: Crawl

Oh yes! *eyes chapter hungrily*. The distortion of reality and the mother taking the child back is a totally new concept, and I'm enjoying it tons. What will happen to Goku! The evil cliffhanger refuses to tell.

Reviewer: san (hungry_worm) Anonymous Date: 06/15/05 - 05:22PM Title: Crawl

Very nice! The chi-transfer from Gojyo to Hakkai let me think of Hakkai as a chi-vampire *snickers* Just as the previous parts, I really enjoyed reading this. Interesting as usual. =)

Author's Response: You know Hakkai, always inventing things. ^_~ Glad you're still enjoying it.

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 06/13/05 - 09:59AM Title: Crawl

i was so happy to see the update..

..it's probably just me..seeing gaiden where there isn't any...but...the 'conversation' between gojyo and hakuryu is so very reminiscent of the few times we see Kenren and Goujun interacting...and i so love it...and like in 500 years gojyo is still taking orders from him!!! history does repeat itself.

the relationship dynamics here between gojyo and hakkai, hakkai and sanzo, and sanzo and goku...all wonderfully portrayed in their thoughts and actions

and because i'm a sucker for the gojyo and hakkai pairing and especially the ten and ken one...the . there are echoes of gaiden in this chapter...the way gojyo speaks to hakkai especially...
as i feel out of all their heaven selves, familial tragedy aside gojyo is the one who has retained all the qualities from his time in heaven that make us (me ^_~) so in love with him...

and sanzo's need for goku; to get to him. the two syllables that undid hakkai just says it all.

i love your take charge hakuryu...this is what he does best, and gojyo will listen as always....see..it's me... i see the ghost of gaiden everywhere...whether its intentional or not...i'm obsessed...but i really am loving this fic...just in case i haven't said it enough.lol ^__~..... ok...ok i'm going already!

Author's Response: echoes of Gaiden, hmm? that's... a good thing! Keep reading! *says no more*

Reviewer: Shiro Anonymous Date: 05/23/05 - 09:03PM Title: Morning

I love the way you plot. The storyline is good and completely drew me in. And it's completely believable and in-character too. I like the idea of using Hakkai's youryouki for healing as well. Great story. ^.^ Hope to read more of it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the comments! I'm always glad to hear all the elements of the story are working together to move the plot forward. And Hakkai and his ability to improvise, you know. ^_~ I just couldn't resist.

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 05/18/05 - 03:18AM Title: Morning

sigh! they're ok...for now...and still the game's not up. you're doing so well at keeping it all secret...is it evil nii...wouldn't surprise me...but then it could be something so totally out there. i can't wait for more...but at least they're all right...for now! ^_~ oh yeah..stubborn stubborn sanzo...anyone else with those extent of injuries. i like him that he is that way.

Author's Response: oh, there's a long way to go yet. No worries there. ^_~

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 05/18/05 - 03:17AM Title: Morning

sigh! they're ok...for now...and still the game's not up. you're doing so well at keeping it all secret...is it evil nii...wouldn't surprise me...but then it could be something so totally out there. i can't wait for more...but at least they're all right...for now! ^_~

Reviewer: itainohime Signed Date: 05/09/05 - 12:47PM Title: Pain

I don't know who I pity more. ;_; And I can't wait to read its conclusion.

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 05/05/05 - 10:59AM Title: Pain

aah! this really makes my head spin...in a good way. thank you, read it all the way through again still riveting as it was first time round

Author's Response: ooh! but I'm not done yet. Your head will be spinning in the other direction by the end. ^_~

Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous Date: 05/01/05 - 05:49PM Title: Pain

La, I guess I got confused.. did Hakkai admit to falling halfway in love with Sanzo or Gojyo? I think it was Sanzo, right? :D I'm just slow. The story is getting progressively depressing, but it's still beautiful. ^^

Reviewer: zan Signed Date: 04/27/05 - 11:11AM Title: Removed

i really really liked this chapter (not least because of the appearance of tenpou and gojoun)...i loved how their heaven selves keep trying to sort of come to the fore in all the confusion of being in the non-space...and i didn't reallise that i had been holding my breath till the end. you have the conflict between? or is it within? konzen and sanzo well written. once again lovely chapter.

Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous Date: 04/26/05 - 04:30PM Title: Removed

;_; I like this story a lot- not much else to say except your characterization is very eloquent... Sometimes it's hard to keep up with the flow of the story, but maybe that's supposed to enhance the semblance of despair/mental chaos here.

Author's Response: thanks for commenting. ^_^
Feedback - including constructive criticism - is always welcome. This is still a wip, and I am having to go back and fill things in. Hopefully things will become clearer with time, and hindsight will make things more sane. ^_~


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