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Reviews For Existential Difficulties
Reviewer: gen Anonymous
Date: 03/06/07 - 07:04AM
Title: Sliding
just amazing really. i bookmarked you on both work - and home pc
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 12/13/05 - 09:10AM
Title: Sliding
I liked this chapter:
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 10/31/05 - 12:34AM
Title: Pieces
Oh poor, poor and confused Hakkai! ^_^ -
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 09/23/05 - 08:13AM
Title: Refuge
I think a warning about the overtones of bestiality would have been nice. Yes, Hakuryu was once Goujun, but he still physically is an animal, and the scene where he rips up Hakkai's arm was one that I think deserved at least a cursory notice in the warning-section.
Reviewer: lazy zan Anonymous
Date: 09/08/05 - 10:46AM
Title: Unsealed
omfg, bloody hellfire...this is one AMAZING effing chapter! this story has just gone supernova in my books! i love, love, love, love, love, love this. *goes off to read it again and again* - and so many hugs to you, i hope i don't smother you before you finish this wonderfully fabulous tale! -
Reviewer: zan Anonymous
Date: 08/27/05 - 10:23PM
Title: Need
the nice thing about going away is you get 3 chaps al at once...and what wondeful things to read when i need a pick me up from two unruly children, a tonne of laundry and a bit of jet lag thrown in!
Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous
Date: 08/17/05 - 07:29PM
Title: Need
Dragon sex! No, I liked the Gaiden allusions, and I've never stopped liking the path of this story, so kudos for writing a very engaging fanfiction. :D I'm so happy that you added more Hakkai/Gojyo action here.
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 06/24/05 - 08:17AM
Title: Beyond
OK, I have been reading this faithfully since you started publishing it, and I have also been shitty about leaving reviews. ._.; That apology said, damn. I do enjoy this fic. You write surreality very well, making it interesting and incoherent all at once. I like the 383 implications that you had in the beginning. It's not my favorite pairing at all, but I am developing something of a fondness for the idea, and you handled their tangled interactions very well. ^_^ The development of the fic into 585 was unexpected, but exciting for me (huge fangirl), and VERY well-done.
Also, I like that you did not 'force' the pairings to overwhelm the rest of the story. There's plot here, and it's a damn fine one besides. The sexual tensions are necessary and at the same time do not interrupt that plot. I loved the elemental sutras, and the delving into Goku's nature and that of his diadem. You have a lot of great ideas and thought that went into this story.
And I look forward to the next section. *dances* Keep writing. It's great stuff.
Reviewer: zan Anonymous
Date: 06/24/05 - 05:00AM
Title: Beyond
aah! brain maeltdown will leave coherent review later...
Reviewer: Blood_Debt Anonymous
Date: 06/17/05 - 05:20PM
Title: Crawl
Oh yes! *eyes chapter hungrily*. The distortion of reality and the mother taking the child back is a totally new concept, and I'm enjoying it tons. What will happen to Goku! The evil cliffhanger refuses to tell.
Reviewer: san (hungry_worm) Anonymous
Date: 06/15/05 - 05:22PM
Title: Crawl
Very nice! The chi-transfer from Gojyo to Hakkai let me think of Hakkai as a chi-vampire *snickers*
Just as the previous parts, I really enjoyed reading this. Interesting as usual. =)
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 06/13/05 - 09:59AM
Title: Crawl
i was so happy to see the update.. ..it's probably just me..seeing gaiden where there isn't any...but...the 'conversation' between gojyo and hakuryu is so very reminiscent of the few times we see Kenren and Goujun interacting...and i so love it...and like in 500 years gojyo is still taking orders from him!!! history does repeat itself. the relationship dynamics here between gojyo and hakkai, hakkai and sanzo, and sanzo and goku...all wonderfully portrayed in their thoughts and actions
and because i'm a sucker for the gojyo and hakkai pairing and especially the ten and ken one...the . there are echoes of gaiden in this chapter...the way gojyo speaks to hakkai especially... and sanzo's need for goku; to get to him. the two syllables that undid hakkai just says it all.
i love your take charge hakuryu...this is what he does best, and gojyo will listen as always....see..it's me... i see the ghost of gaiden everywhere...whether its intentional or not...i'm obsessed...but i really am loving this fic...just in case i haven't said it enough.lol ^__~..... ok...ok i'm going already!
Reviewer: Shiro Anonymous
Date: 05/23/05 - 09:03PM
Title: Morning
I love the way you plot. The storyline is good and completely drew me in. And it's completely believable and in-character too. I like the idea of using Hakkai's youryouki for healing as well. Great story. ^.^ Hope to read more of it.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 05/18/05 - 03:18AM
Title: Morning
sigh! they're ok...for now...and still the game's not up. you're doing so well at keeping it all secret...is it evil nii...wouldn't surprise me...but then it could be something so totally out there. i can't wait for more...but at least they're all right...for now! ^_~ oh yeah..stubborn stubborn sanzo...anyone else with those extent of injuries. i like him that he is that way.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 05/18/05 - 03:17AM
Title: Morning
sigh! they're ok...for now...and still the game's not up. you're doing so well at keeping it all secret...is it evil nii...wouldn't surprise me...but then it could be something so totally out there. i can't wait for more...but at least they're all right...for now! ^_~
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 05/09/05 - 12:47PM
Title: Pain
I don't know who I pity more. ;_; And I can't wait to read its conclusion.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 05/05/05 - 10:59AM
Title: Pain
aah! this really makes my head spin...in a good way. thank you, read it all the way through again still riveting as it was first time round
Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous
Date: 05/01/05 - 05:49PM
Title: Pain
La, I guess I got confused.. did Hakkai admit to falling halfway in love with Sanzo or Gojyo? I think it was Sanzo, right? :D I'm just slow. The story is getting progressively depressing, but it's still beautiful. ^^
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 04/27/05 - 11:11AM
Title: Removed
i really really liked this chapter (not least because of the appearance of tenpou and gojoun)...i loved how their heaven selves keep trying to sort of come to the fore in all the confusion of being in the non-space...and i didn't reallise that i had been holding my breath till the end. you have the conflict between? or is it within? konzen and sanzo well written. once again lovely chapter.
Reviewer: Lilith Anonymous
Date: 04/26/05 - 04:30PM
Title: Removed
;_; I like this story a lot- not much else to say except your characterization is very eloquent... Sometimes it's hard to keep up with the flow of the story, but maybe that's supposed to enhance the semblance of despair/mental chaos here. |