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Reviews For Afterglow
Reviewer: gen50 Anonymous
Date: 07/24/07 - 11:08PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
i thought that was cute, in a gojyo kind of way. slightly off-kilter, very nice introspective mindset in the morning
Reviewer: pure Anonymous
Date: 04/08/07 - 01:49AM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
ha ha ha! i thought gojyo was going to have an anerism! althoght hakkai could have acted a bit less...normal. mabey a bit more love sick
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 11:25PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
OhMyGod! Hakkai was the seme! That is ~so~ sexy! The build-up from Gojyo's POV was hilarious! Too bad there wasn't a happy literary visual of what occurred that night! But still, very hot!
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 11:23PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
OhMyGod! Hakkai was the seme! Oh, that is so sexy! Too bad we didn't have a literary visual of went down that night! I'm sure my eyes would cross, too! Great job building up Gojyo's perspective! It was really funny and cute!
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 11:22PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
OhMyGod! Hakkai was the seme! Oh, that is so sexy! Too bad we didn't have a literary visual of went down that night! I'm sure my eyes would cross, too! Great job building up Gojyo's perspective! It was really funny and cute!
Reviewer: jessica Anonymous
Date: 10/05/06 - 11:22PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
OhMyGod! Hakkai was the seme! Oh, that is so sexy! Too bad we didn't have a literary visual of went down that night! I'm sure my eyes would cross, too! Great job building up Gojyo's perspective! It was really funny and cute!
Reviewer: jessiakayuki Anonymous
Date: 07/29/06 - 01:38AM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
come on it was getting so good stop being so lazy and please make this into a multiple chapter instead of just one
Reviewer: Echo Grey Anonymous
Date: 06/07/06 - 01:38PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
That was great! The way Gojyo panics and refuses to see what's right in front of him until the very end, the way Hakkai is Hakkai and... "Suddenly, one plus one did not equal two. It equaled eight." For some reason, I find this line hysterically funny. Gojyo-and-Hakkai math... ah, it's better than the real thing.
Reviewer: zan Signed
Date: 04/20/05 - 06:39PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
"His mind ran, screaming...home...equaled eight." and Gojyo's mind melting and flowing...wonderful. i read this before and i'm reading it again, and my girl will be late for school...and i am going to join in the chorus of...a sequel please...please...ok. no pressure you know. love.
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 04/20/05 - 08:50AM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
Second review, just to let you know that I printed this out and read it to my girlfriend during a long car ride yesterday. We were both hyperventilating with laughter by the end, especially at the line about Gojyo "feeling his brain shut down". ^_^
Reviewer: itainohime Signed
Date: 04/18/05 - 02:27PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU. Holy shit, this just perked up my day. ^_^ You have Gojyo's voice down pat. I like the fragmented nature of his thought processes--you can almost smell the acid scent of his circuit breakers frying the longer the fic goes on, and Hakkai's completely accepting reaction to it all is priceless. ^__^ And of course, Hakkai-seme is always a wonder to behold. What a hilarious, marvelous fic. Thanks for sharing. (And I beg of thee, consider a sequel! At the very least, think it over? ^^; )
Reviewer: permetaform Anonymous
Date: 03/25/05 - 11:30PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
::cannot. stop. laughing:: oh but this! THIS! ::giggles unashamedly:: marvelous characterization, lovely lovely panicked Gojyo, so nice all around, and the beeping on the nose is just precious and perfect in so many ways. Thank you for sharing this! ::glomps::
Reviewer: zan Anonymous
Date: 03/24/05 - 12:04PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
sigh! domesticity at its best! all he needs now is the cup of coffee which Hakkai just made and a smoke!
Reviewer: Laura Anonymous
Date: 03/22/05 - 05:04PM
Title: Love Me, My Chickens
Oohhhhhhh, but, but, I want more!!! More story! Aw, well, you write Gojyo Hakkai so well. Just keep it up (hopeful look). This was a lot of fun. Hakkai soo has Gojyo under his thumb. |
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