Reviewer: Emerald Phoenix524 Anonymous Date: 06/09/05 - 08:28PM Title: Happy Halloween

This was rather choppy and short. The scenes changed way too quickly for my taste and there was no character development whatsoever; the characters were very flat and stereotypical. There was also no actual reason as to why they were trick-or-treating. However, putting that aside, this was very cute and I like your writing style. The descriptions could've been more vivid and at times I was confused. It was still a great read and I know that you will, with practice, become a great writer.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will try and develop my characters futher in future, although I can't promise much. I try my best, but it is reviews like these that push me to go further.However, I didn't put a reason in as to why they were trick or treating because there -was- no rational reason in which the Sanzo-ikkou would go and trick-or-treat. Thanks again for being honest, and I hope to become what you predicted for me.

Reviewer: amai_yume Signed Date: 02/05/05 - 06:58AM Title: Happy Halloween

Hey, small world! You're here, too! ^_^

Author's Response: Yup! I try to join all the large saiyuki fandoms I can find. Like here, animespiral, and ff.net. But you don't seem to have any stories up - why not?