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Reviews For Crossfire
Reviewer: Haru_Jyo-jyo Anonymous
Date: 03/25/08 - 04:56PM
Title: Red & Silver
Mannnn~ Felt so friggin' bad for 'Kai there but I loved the way you portrayed Hazel. This is prolly the first story that's made me see him in a different light. Wish there was more, but thanks for even that much. Hah! Hakkai and Hazel's confrontation. Girl fight~ x3 <3 Heh, a favorite story right here. Beautifully written, btw.
Reviewer: Blaqueluna Anonymous
Date: 01/23/05 - 07:17AM
Title: Red & Silver
"And so begins the War." Nice! Gojyo, in all of his bravado is also capable of moments of vulnerability. I am quite surprised at the rare pairing you've portrayed, and really amazed on how well-written it is. ^.~ Updates, ne?
Reviewer: Sylvia Anonymous
Date: 01/21/05 - 03:09PM
Title: Red & Silver
I liked this very much - Gojyo is so lonely and needy and insecure in who or what he is, and so starved for affection (that he knows only in phsyical form) that he's easy prey, in spite of being more than smart enough to know what's going on. And Hazel sees him for just what he is, and plays on his weaknesses perfectly - sweet and accomodating indeed, beneath the bluster. Hakkai's reaction was also wonderful - so possessive and confident of Gojyo, but evidently not ready to fill the need he knows is there. A painful story, and very good. I'd love to read more.
Reviewer: celestial_x Anonymous
Date: 11/24/04 - 09:35PM
Title: Red & Silver
ah, nice. i loooved it when hazel said that his being clever had "occured" to him. smug statements suit him very well. i think you really picked up on a few good points. i have always perceived gojyo as being easily influenced and i liked that you had hazel exploit gojyos identity issues. i didnt expect sex either! what a pleasant surprise. hakkais reaction was well played as well, but i do wonder why you kept using gonou... |
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