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Reviews For The Look
Reviewer: Lauren Anonymous
Date: 07/13/05 - 11:02AM
Title: *Peers*
I enjoyed this story. The edge of angst.
Reviewer: LJ: hungry_worm Anonymous
Date: 05/17/05 - 08:05PM
Title: *Peers*
This was really good. Dark and sad, the tinges of bitterness so tangible. Both characters are written very good, especially Gojyo (simply because I don't see that Sanzo's past would have been like that, although it might have been scarring enough for him that his first kill was actually a nearly-molestor). The atmosphere and the way you told the story are really good, I like this piece very much :) And the way Gojyo would be able to coax information out of him, and Sanzo's theoretical reaction are just so realistic. So nice. ^_^
Reviewer: Danny Anonymous
Date: 03/20/05 - 07:00PM
Title: *Peers*
Oh, man that is so good. Totally bittersweet. You don't need to be a bit worried about your charcterizations, because they seemed absolutely perfect to me. In fact, this is one of the most in character fics I've read in a while. Everything fit really nicely, your prose was interesting and your dialog was great too (not much of it to judge, but it still seemed appropriate to have less words). Everything worked so well and I enjoyed reading this so much! Thanks for a great story.
Reviewer: RazZadig@yahoo.com Anonymous
Date: 08/19/04 - 10:22PM
Title: *Peers*
This story does make a lot of sense--canon wise. Perhaps more so for Goyjo then Sanzo, but still this ending rings true. Great job!
Reviewer: Solaas Signed
Date: 08/01/04 - 07:56AM
Title: *Peers*
I really, really enjoyed this one. You show a side of Gojyo that I'm a grea fan of, and that I believe canon supports. The guy's a softie on so many levels, even tough he frequently uses this to get lucky. :) Though it is unclear to me why he and Sanzou should've agreed to try having sex, I simply don't care. It's gorgeous, and it's a favourite! Thank you for writing this. (Comments on grammar have been sent in a separate post.) |
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