Reviewer: Ayaka Signed Date: 08/14/09 - 01:55AM Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I feel like a total dork. I rushed over here to read your fiction as soon as I got an email that it was posted. How lucky was I that there were TWO new ones!? Anyway I can't decide if I like you or hate you since it's almost one in the morning and your AMAZING stories have kept me up late! LOL Your dialogue was great! I don't think you had any reason to worry. I'm glad you ended up finishing this story. There were many points in your story where I had to make myself breathe again. It was really beautiful. Amazing stories like this make me so happy. So now that my guts are all mushy and in a puddle on the floor I'm going to go try to get some sleep...if that's even possible after all the lovely imagery you've just presented!

Author's Response:

I...Thank you so, so, much. I can't tell you how happy I am to recieve your review. This...I'm so flattered. I'm speechless. Thank you so much. I think you just made my day. You're far too kind, and hearing that you enjoyed my writing so much just makes me feel all light hearted and elated. Thank you again. Also, if you're interested, my friend Cheshiremask (on fanfiction.net) re-wrote this same story from Gojyo's perspective. If you're interested. Thank you again. I know I've said it already (multiple times) but you made me swoon. ~<3

 - Selvanic