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Reviews For Just Out Of Reach
Reviewer: Call me Kat Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 09:44PM
Title: None
Oh, sorry I forgot to add that I liked the tag on ending, and even if you never make a sequel I think it added more believeability. I of course would really like to read a sequel. I think I could assume where things are leading, and as long as it wasn't done too cliche I think it has great potential. Certianly works with the "just take me" kind of thing you had going in this... I'm really tired I hope this makes sense. -.-
Reviewer: Call me Kat Anonymous
Date: 07/22/05 - 09:21PM
Title: None
I really liked this one I think you potrayed Hakkai really well with some nice insight (better than most certianly). There were a few lines that really amused me, a good blend of seriousness with silliness. I did think it was rushed before the sex scene, not just in the actual interaction but in text. You can go right into hot passion but after previous parts I felt you at least needed more description of overwelming desire. Also wasn't to fond of the episode overview type things, he can think on them but do we really need a recap? Overall I thought it was quite well done and much enjoyed.
Reviewer: Chin_Yisou Signed
Date: 12/30/04 - 02:11PM
Title: None
This looks really good, however I don't think the PWP at the end is a true Sanzo reaction and/or the situation seemed to have heated up a bit too fast for it to be believeable. I still like it though!
Reviewer: ryushin Signed
Date: 05/11/04 - 08:55AM
Title: None
Honey, I always like your stories, haven't found one I didn't. Let me tell you, I'm not fan of the HakkaixSanzo pairing but, damn, you might have changed my mind. Hakkai's inner monologues were killing me. "Thank you very much Gojyo" *ggg However, don't get me worng, try not to make it into a series, sequel would be fine but nothing with a cliffhanger or the like because, sweety, you have the tendency to not finish, we talked about this, see your wonderful UNFINISHED "In season". *wink Straight 10 |
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