Reviewer: Rayven Signed Date: 10/01/08 - 08:11AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this so far - the characters are nicely fleshed out, but with a hint of mystery, and the writing is very clean and descriptive without being purple. Great job!


Author's Response:

Thankie Muchlie. Im working on the next chapter right now, but I keep getting distracted by stuff, like well, the manga... lol.

   I have a feeling this might turn into a rather long piece, so I hope it doesn't get too boring *grin*