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Reviewer: Harukami Anonymous Date: 01/30/05 - 08:30PM Title: Gojyo learns of the Way

[whistles] This was *fantastic*. Seriously, such small, daily things like a flu and a kid who doesn't understand kissing, but it all has so many levels of meaning here and it made me laugh at several points, and get teary at one (Goku and his hunger). Thank you for sharing it.

Reviewer: Daeuiel Anonymous Date: 09/04/04 - 11:54PM Title: Gojyo learns of the Way

Great story with excellent characterizations...after reading the author's note, hey, no one can nitpick your using such an excellent plot device as the kissing instructions, especially in a show like Saiyuki, where the time period and the technology exhibited defies logic. But how good of you to justify your usage to us plebians. I liked it, really. It was too cute. I'd grovel for a follow-up. *looks hopeful, like Goku in front of a marketplace*

Reviewer: ryo Anonymous Date: 07/14/04 - 06:26AM Title: Gojyo learns of the Way

great clip...^^ I loved your characterization when it came to Hakkai!!! He's my favorite character and you wrote as him so well!!!

Reviewer: iamzuul Anonymous Date: 05/06/04 - 01:18PM Title: Goku learns to kiss

That was excellant! That dry humor evinced in Hakkai's thoughts is spot-on characterization. I especially liked the different kinds of 'Hakkai smiles', as well as the verses chosen from the Tao te Ching. One of my favorites has always been verses 11 and 33, and I'm looking for ways to insert them into my own Saiyuki fictions. I hope to see many more fictions from you! Rock on!

Reviewer: Quirk otheTrade Anonymous Date: 05/03/04 - 04:29PM Title: Goku learns to kiss

I liked it! The little bits of sarcasm was priceless. Everyone's got that annoying little voice in their head, and Hakai's is DAMNED funny. I expect more of the same!


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