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Reviews For Distant Water's Gentle Guise
Reviewer: Harukami Anonymous
Date: 01/30/05 - 08:30PM
Title: Gojyo learns of the Way
[whistles] This was *fantastic*. Seriously, such small, daily things like a flu and a kid who doesn't understand kissing, but it all has so many levels of meaning here and it made me laugh at several points, and get teary at one (Goku and his hunger). Thank you for sharing it.
Reviewer: Daeuiel Anonymous
Date: 09/04/04 - 11:54PM
Title: Gojyo learns of the Way
Great story with excellent characterizations...after reading the author's note, hey, no one can nitpick your using such an excellent plot device as the kissing instructions, especially in a show like Saiyuki, where the time period and the technology exhibited defies logic. But how good of you to justify your usage to us plebians. I liked it, really. It was too cute. I'd grovel for a follow-up. *looks hopeful, like Goku in front of a marketplace*
Reviewer: ryo Anonymous
Date: 07/14/04 - 06:26AM
Title: Gojyo learns of the Way
great clip...^^ I loved your characterization when it came to Hakkai!!! He's my favorite character and you wrote as him so well!!!
Reviewer: iamzuul Anonymous
Date: 05/06/04 - 01:18PM
Title: Goku learns to kiss
That was excellant! That dry humor evinced in Hakkai's thoughts is spot-on characterization. I especially liked the different kinds of 'Hakkai smiles', as well as the verses chosen from the Tao te Ching. One of my favorites has always been verses 11 and 33, and I'm looking for ways to insert them into my own Saiyuki fictions. I hope to see many more fictions from you! Rock on!
Reviewer: Quirk otheTrade Anonymous
Date: 05/03/04 - 04:29PM
Title: Goku learns to kiss
I liked it! The little bits of sarcasm was priceless. Everyone's got that annoying little voice in their head, and Hakai's is DAMNED funny. I expect more of the same! |