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Reviews For Lacking in Manners
Reviewer: Shanny Signed
Date: 08/31/10 - 04:28PM
Title: Chapter 1
Oh man, that was brilliant! I simply adore Hakkai here!! I was grinning like a cheshire cat the whole time and giggling by the end! That was very fun and shiny. Thanks for posting!
I have been trying to review your other story, A Different Life to let you know how good I think it is, but I keep coming up with an error every time. So I'll mention it here. I LOVE that story. The plot was interesting, the characters great, the length good, and the humor fit in perfectly. I thought it was very well written and flowed like an actual episode. To date it's my fac Saiyuki fic I've read, and I have read a lot of them!
Reviewer: Claire Anonymous
Date: 08/04/07 - 01:28AM
Title: Chapter 1
AWESOME. Thank you for making a simple fangirl very happy ^___^ Ugh, Hazel. So satisfying to get all that tension out in the open, yes? Dealing with Hazel for so long puts me in a distinctly Hakkai-esque mood of contained annoyance.... I love the idea of Sanzo bringing them both to heel. Well done there. (Ugh, Hazel, and his gross Sanzo crush) ...But, yes. Very nasty and middle-school-girl-ish, and very, very satisfying. Thank you! (:
Reviewer: bywthedragon Anonymous
Date: 08/03/07 - 05:12PM
Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant! Very funny, I just love it that two such very intelligent men can sink to the level of Goku and Gojyo. Albeit with more advanced vobulary. ^^
Reviewer: a_mael Signed
Date: 07/20/07 - 08:42AM
Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for posting this! I did nothing but giggle all the way through it! Very funny...especially when Hakkai fist loses it, and tells Hazel that he fights like a girl. I also really loved the dandified snake bit, and the necrophilia. I detest Hazel...does it show? Awesome read. Thanks! |
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