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Reviewer: watchersprout Signed Date: 04/14/08 - 12:36AM Title: Chapter 1

OMG.  This story  It was amazing...

Reviewer: wongkk Anonymous Date: 05/25/07 - 04:19AM Title: Chapter 1

I found this to be a cleverly imagined scenario of great cyclical bleakness;  what a wonderful example of painful, skilful writing!  I hate my mind having to receive the terrible and tangled picture of Hakkai allowing Sanzo to exploit his youkai aggression and then of the subtle, intelligent priest descended into a purely physical means of confronting his fulfilment and other deficits.  I don't like Saiyuki boyporn in general but the quality of imagination and expression here has lifted this piece way above the usual sides of that particular box!  I don't think I'm going to be able to forget the image of these two self-damaging in the way you've described - and that is down to your skill in writing.   My compliments!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  I really don't know what else to say.  I understand the pain that reading in can was very difficult to write.  That said, I'm sure we all have those stories that show up in our heads and won't leave us alone until we've written them.  I appreciate  your having taken time to read and to comment.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Maid of Ithilien Anonymous Date: 05/22/07 - 10:46PM Title: Chapter 1

This has an awful fascination.  It's very well done even though I cringe while reading it.

Author's Response: I will choose to see that for the compliment that it is, and say thank you very much.  I appreciate the feedback.  I know what you mean, too.  I cringed while writing it.

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