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Reviewer: 7veilsphaedra Anonymous Date: 02/11/07 - 01:40AM Title: Chapter 3

Hilarious! The title is very ironic.

Author's Response: Thanks again!  The title will work it's way in there, eventually.

Reviewer: zoom Anonymous Date: 01/19/07 - 12:07AM Title: Chapter 1

I. Love. This. Story.  It is so hilarious that everytime I read it I laugh out loud.  Everyone is so in-character.  All of the dialogue is so natural.  I cannot wait for the next chapter!  Thank you so much for writing and posting this!

Author's Response: Wow, Thank you so much!  This is thew first time I've tried a humor fic, and it's so great to know that it came off all right!  Thnaks!!!

Reviewer: Sanada Anonymous Date: 01/07/07 - 02:21PM Title: Chapter 3

I feel kind of stupid. Until this chapter I didn't realize what story this was a continuation of. It wasn’t until Hakkai was explaining to Sanzo how he and Gojyo got together that I put it together. "Long Life Arc" wasn’t a good enough hint for me. >.<

I truly admire your ability to write these characters. When Hakkai started to explain what he was doing in Gojyo's bed, I could just see Sanzo's face. Hakkai can be so mischievous! While Gojyo and Hakkai are my favorite, Hakkai and Sanzo will always share a different sort of bond that is apparent in their conversations with each other.

Author's Response: Well, thanks very much ^_^  I was really hoping that the humor would come through.  These guys are so much fun to write!  Hakkai's really quite the brat, when he wats to be!

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 12/15/06 - 11:48AM Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for continuing. ^__^

love again


Author's Response: Just wait until Sanzo confronts Hakkai...that's going to be FUN!!  Thanks once again!

Reviewer: zan Anonymous Date: 12/05/06 - 09:46AM Title: Chapter 1


I'm taking my time to read these. I hope you continue the discussion, as I would like to see your take on it!

Author's Response:

I definitely plan to continue, but it will take a little longer, as I don't already have most of it written.  Thanks!


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